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最后一个自然段建议不要把重心直截了当地说出来,可以通过对小动物的描写来突出。
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You are the enemy of china!
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无论干嘛,要保持开心
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God is God, but you are not God, you are only a man, do not go to the Lord, you will be defiled the Holy race!
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不相信自己的人,连努力的价值都没有
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I can fly——,从八楼跳下来——,bia ji......
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