楼主: 李海军老师
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《议论文》和《绰号、名字的故事》(二稿) |
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I can fly——,从八楼跳下来——,bia ji......
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slganture
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田一禾
还不如多写一些自己对外号态度的变化
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Happiness is just a feeling
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Happiness is just a feeling
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Happiness is just a feeling
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郑效然
呵呵哒
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Happiness is just a feeling
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At that time, would you still remember me?
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张景宣
字还是有点少,首先我认为你的事例提的不够!一篇议论文首先要围绕论点去做论证,其次还要用事实去支撑。
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At that time, would you still remember me?
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